What I liked about this painting:
I am actually quite pleased with the impression of a black, shiny machine with silver details. She shading on some of the details, the pin cushion for example, lends a 3D effect to the painting.
What I might do differently:
The perspective on the machine is all wrong. This was actually my second attempt, and there are areas that are still off. I am not enamored with the background. I realize now that the machine actually looks like it is falling off the back of the table!
Abra cadabra.... the table edge has moved!
What I learned:
I learned to make black without using black! I mixed Cadmium red, Ultramarine blue and a dark yellow. It really didn't look black, but on paper, it works. The instructor was adamant that I not pull out my tube of black as she says it really looks flat and has no vibrancy. I'm not certain mine has vibrancy, but....
I was quite pleased with the impression of silver that I was able to create using various mixes of white with my black. Nowhere on the painting is pure white used.
I never would have thought of tackling a sewing machine, Dreaming, but you've done well in both attempts. I prefer the shiny back of the first machine, but I am impressed with how you you created a black color out of others in the second. I actually like the reddish background because it is a great foil for the dark machine. I like the textures that you've painted in the woven piece of cloth, the metal machine, and the prickly pin cushion. You've managed to give a strong 3-D feeling to the sewing machine. I also like the strong triangular overall composition, emphasized by your use of yellow. Well done, this non-artist would say!
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